Feedback etc

For the clips we have taken we decided to record feedback from several people and get their opinions on factors which they liked and what they thought could be improved upon.

We decided to focus the feedback on the target audience to get an idea of what they thought as well as widening the spectrum slightly and asked someone over the youth audience to broaden the comments.

To start with we compiled comments from a male and female aged 16 and 17.
Their comments are as followed..
Joe Shrimpton thought

• the choice of song fit the genre perfectly and thought it reflected the genre of a Rom com quite easily.
• He found the sequence to be clear to follow and found the characters disorientated approach to be funny.
• He also could easily establish the target audience due to the fast paced editing, the ages of the characters involved and the situation which the character is in.
• Also the use of cerialin the titles was thought to be a good idea, however to improve on this he commented that more time needs to be allocated to that the audience are able to establish and read what is on screen.

Harley Marshall was the second person of the similar age range who we consulted on the clip.

• She commented on the comedy aspects saying that she thought that it was funny.(This occurring from both males and females proves vital as it means that the film has crossover appeal.)
• She also picked up on Joe's point about the time period of the cereal clip to be longer and clearer so that it really stands out.
• Also she said that it was easily noticed that the genre was a rom com
• Like Joe she thought the narrative was easy to follow and that the non-diegetic music fit the pace and mood of the clip perfect.
• However to improve the stumble needs a little work upon it to make it look a little false
  

Lynn Benisek was the person queried about the clip from the older age of the spectrum.

• Her comments where very similar to those that the others made. Making similar points around the issue of music, the ease of genre recognition and its comedic properties. As well as the improvements toward the titles.
• She also had a point to say about the logo making a comment on the logo mentioning that its of a high standard saying that it is impressive to say its not a professional job.
• Also due to the fact she enjoyed the clip shows that the clip has appeal to an audience wider than expected.